My Life


  By karlee

My Life

looking out a farytale window

seeing people love

wishing i was there with them

because they're good people from up above

watching them be happy

watching them getalong

hoping I'll become like them

I'll just have to give it time

god knows I'm true for sure

he knows I'm a good person inside

thats all that matters

I'll just have to give it time

I'll just think of peaceful noises

like a wind chime

I walk into my house

all the drama starts

asking god to make it stop

Its just killing my heart

I have 3 more years to come

then I'll be out of the fire

life will start

no more getting shocked by wire

eight years later I'm a doctor

my kids mean the world to me

my husband is very supportive

man how can this be

cant believe the time came

my
family means the world to me

oh my gosh

oh my gosh

how can this be

my life is here

I have friends

people care about me

my life has began

all I got to say is

thank you lord.

this wasn't really a article it was more of a poem about my life if you listen very closely it explains how my family treats me. ever since i was little I have been abused emotionally and sometimes physicclly. they say they wish i was dead. my family just has never been nice to me. all I can say is that america needs to stop not just physical abuse but emotional abuse. I think thats what causes so much mental illnesses. I s emotional abuse. I don't have very many friends either. that is another thing with this country is so much bullying and that really needs to stop. I have been teased and harrassed my whole life and need friends. and there's more then just one person dealing with this problem in the world. but i anyone want to make a stop at this you need to write more about topics like this.

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karleehronek

#1 Posted by karleehronek - Mar 10, 2009, 10:29 am Rating: ratingfullratingfullratingfullratingfullratingfull Unrated

that was good karlee I agree with you and i'm sorry about the way you get treated

karleehronek

#2 Posted by karleehronek - Mar 10, 2009, 10:38 am Rating: ratingfullratingfullratingfullratingfullratingfull Unrated

good job

avarano

#3 Posted by avarano - Mar 10, 2009, 4:50 pm Rating: ratingfullratingfullratingfullratingemptyratingempty Unrated

Life is worth living!

smileyalice

#4 Posted by smileyalice - Mar 11, 2009, 12:57 am Rating: ratingfullratingfullratingfullratingfullratingfull Unrated

your poem touched me. Am very happy that you are free now. Past is past.Now is all that matters. The best is yet to come. Thanks for sharing.

karleehronek

#5 Posted by karleehronek - Mar 11, 2009, 1:48 pm Rating: ratingfullratingfullratingfullratingfullratingfull Unrated

that was very good
that waas very good
that was very good
that made me feel better cause I always thought I was the one that got treated bad but I'm not

Maryanne09

#6 Posted by Maryanne09 - Mar 12, 2009, 7:43 am Rating: ratingfullratingfullratingfullratingfullratingfull Unrated

Good job!

#7 Posted by Nina (guest) - Jun 4, 2009, 3:40 pm Rating: ratingfullratingfullratingfullratingfullratingfull Unrated

Karlee,

So much emotion behind every word and I hang on the words because I have been there mama! Yes the world can be cruel. Yes friends will hurt you, kids will hurt your feelings. Your parents will ignore your God given right to be loved. I was there mama. I am 26 years old now and I learn every day how to handle these situations. I can tell you that these people will always be here. They were here when I was your age and they are here in your generationa nd they will be here in the next generation. But guess what Karlee. There is more good in the world than evil. There are more good people in the world than evil ones. I have an assignment I would like for you too try. I want you too stop writing or focusing on all the bad things in your life and focus on the good things mama. If you keep a journal write out all the things you love about your life. I dont care if its just one. Everymorning when u wake up. Read it. Every night before you go to bed read it. Also. Start ordering your day. At night before you go to bed after you read your good journal entrys, sit and think about your fairytale life and believe that you can have it. Try to feel your dream life as if it already exists. You have my email and I would love to hear about your progress. You have just gained a new friend so consider this problem solved and lets work on gaining you some more solution points. With tons of love and support and blessings sent your way, Supernatural Favor!!!


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